Friday, October 17, 2008
Analysis of the 3 pieces
As I look through my pieces of work, I saw myself editing quite a bit. I used words that I knew I could improve on if I just took my time. But we had to write it quickly, and we couldn’t stop, so I when I corrected these three pieces, I seemed to have made them longer in length. These pieces were short; only 5 or 6 lines to be exact. Now, they are longer than that after correcting them.
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That was the same with mine, I think we were rushed in class thats why we had alot of editing to do!!:)
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