So today in class: couldn't take it. I am horrible with taking criticisms, and I felt like flipping out. So, I appreciated all the suggestions each and every one of you made. Like Strong said, it was a short story. I tried not to make it into a novel, but from the sounds of the suggestions, I can make it into one. So, I will correct this story and make it into a better story. And someone commented it was high-schoolish. That's what I was going for in a way.
-Emily-
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Don't worry I for one am the worst when it comes to criticism constructive or not. In class the practice workshops didnt go so well either, every one butchered the two poems, it was almost predictable that it would happen to the first person up to go. i think if you were to revise the piece and do it again it will be liess frustrating.
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